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I really liked this one. All I saw was some punctuation errors. In the last line you don't need the dash. I think in this one the repeating was necessary. ...

It had a good meaning. The only part that got me just like in_too_deep said is the end. Instead of repeating yourself just keep one of those lines.

*cries* That is so depressing to write this in an attempt to make your friend feel guilty for what she has decided to do. It's great that she didn't get ...

I LOVE PANIC! AT THE DISCO!!!! THEY ARE SO AWESOME!!!

It's not really supposed to sound good sexual but bad. I am afraid to be in the bedsheets that i'm in because in the poem i'm not having a great ...

I absolutely love it. The only thing i would change is more detail about the surroundings and what exactly they are doing. I think it was sweet.

It made me want to cry. I can feel the emotion in it and know it must be about a real person. I loved it. No crit.

I like it. It's short and sweet but has a good message. Parts of the poem like the line [quote]and all thats right.[quote/] doesn't seem to fit in with the ...

I liked the poem. The only thing i saw that bugged me was that in the last two lines you stopped the rhyming which kind of throws it off. Good ...

I'm sure they will.

Good poem. I really enjoyed reading it and felt the emotion you put in. No crit.

I enjoyed it and was also confused on: i can feel your fear and love tremble everytime i touch your skin Overall good job.

LOL! Nice P.S. Thanks for the crit!

Thanks Sohini. I hope someday i will finish the puzzle.

I liked the poem and how it was written. I too like your style. The second to last stanza was my favorite and i really felt the emotion in it. ...